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  • Well put, but poorly organized.

    I feel the entire argument was jammed into one paragraph and that the second to last paragraph could have been with the body if the body was split into multiple paragraphs.
    • 13/12/2004
    • 12:55:44
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.