Informative and interesting. Keep up the good work!
- 13/11/2005
- 16:45:43
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Summing the paragraphs with one sentence from the actual text (" ... ") is not - what I understand to be - a summary. You could try to say the main point in your own words.
- 10/11/2005
- 05:01:22
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Creative topic doesn't really write the essay itself. You didn't have to make chapters to this essay as they are really short. With some creative writing you could of have combined the chapters as one fluent piece of text.I believe if you wrote this essay again with all the information you put in it - you'd do better.
- 21/10/2005
- 12:54:30
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
And good references! :)
- 21/10/2005
- 12:44:58
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
But conclusion rather short and you could go deeper with it.
- 16/10/2005
- 15:08:00
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
For a high school essay. :)
- 16/10/2005
- 15:01:11
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
If level is "College, 4th, Senior", I must say this doesn't really make sense for me. You should think more about the structure of this essay and forget about all these lists you wrote.
- 16/10/2005
- 06:24:46
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Also bibliography is missing.
- 16/10/2005
- 06:09:56
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Hard to read and the business idea is not quite innovative.
- 16/10/2005
- 06:02:33
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
One of the best I've ever seen here!
- 20/07/2005
- 12:44:04
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
But where are the references?
- 21/02/2005
- 03:26:59
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
But way too short.
- 21/02/2005
- 03:24:18
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
maybe I'm just so out of this all that I don't get this or I really have to wonder why CheatHouse doesn't accept great essays in other languages and lets trough this kind of poor ones in English.
- 21/02/2005
- 03:11:40
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
And bibliography seems okay but there are some quite old ones in it. But your writing is good!
- 15/02/2005
- 03:43:32
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
In what schools they call 303 words an essay?
- 15/02/2005
- 03:39:43
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Used resources of information are valid and there are many of them. Good work!
- 10/02/2005
- 01:38:35
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
But is this all to it? Going a bit more deeper would of have given this essay something it just now doesn't have.
- 10/02/2005
- 01:34:17
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
but the title - what the ****?
- 10/02/2005
- 01:30:40
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This one is amazing! You have found lots of information and done a great job with it!
- 07/02/2005
- 23:30:22
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
You have gathered lot of information and refered to many sources.
- 07/02/2005
- 23:26:06
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I still would of have wanted to see the websites from where you got all this information.I think it's important to let the reader to know where you got your information wheater it was from the internet or books.
- 07/02/2005
- 22:43:39
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
You disguss the facts nicely. I understand that everyone has their own opinion on the benefits of indoor tanning and you seem to have represented yours fine in this essay.You have adjusted the articles you used to your own writing in a fine way.After all, I disagree with indoor tanning being a good thing to do. :)
- 07/02/2005
- 22:37:19
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Nicely represents the 4 P's.
- 29/01/2005
- 02:46:57
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I really liked this one but I think the author could of have analyzed online recruiting some more from the company's side.
- 29/01/2005
- 02:43:50
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I agree that this was kind of short but otherwise good one.
- 14/12/2004
- 10:12:59
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.