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  • Pretty good

    This was a fairly interesting essay/story, but I think you need to just review what you wrote. There were numerous errors in spelling and punctuation. Otherwise, the message was clear.
    • 26/12/2004
    • 15:39:27
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    I must say I am very impressed you wrote this in sixth grade. Excellent work! The only suggestion I have is to add on a conclusion, or an ending paragraph to sum up your paper.
    • 26/12/2004
    • 15:33:08
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Job

    This essay is written very well from your perspective, but at some points, the sentence structure takes away from the point you are trying to make. Good job!
    • 18/12/2004
    • 11:18:25
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.