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  • Uhhh...confused

    I had no idea what you were talking about! I became confused in the sense that I didn't know if you were referring to Langston or yourself in certain areas. There are many grammatical errors as well. What did your test have to do with Jesus? ............
    • 31/01/2005
    • 12:27:13
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • VERY GOOD

    I extremely enjoyed reading this essay. I loved the use of different well-known incidents throughout the essay. You kept my attention. Keep it up!
    • 31/01/2005
    • 12:22:42
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay....

    I thought that you were very informative, but failed to use colorful words. True, this isn't a descriptive essay, but you might want to try and use words that capture your audience. I still say it was a good essay though!
    • 31/01/2005
    • 12:14:04
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Job!

    <html><font size=2 color=red face=tahoma>I really liked that you used terms such as "we" and "us" to help bring about a sense of unity. Instead of attacking the reader, you acted like you were in agreement with them. I did notice a few grammatical errors and awkward sentences, but your point was well made.PS I don't believe "secularity" is a word.</font></html>
    • 31/01/2005
    • 11:22:57
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Gj....

    I thought this was a very good essay. The only suggestion I would make is try not to throw in personal elements when you submit it on here. It makes it difficult for other people to use. GOOD JOB! :)
    • 31/01/2005
    • 10:58:49
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.