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  • Good but could be improved

    Like tinkerbell11 said, you should really put in bibliography info so that it is recognized as fact and has supporting evidence.
    • 30/04/2006
    • 11:42:06
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.

  • Pretty good...

    I have never been to sydney and so readking this essay has told me a little about it.I now have an interest to go there.But I would like a little bit more detail.=D
    • 29/12/2004
    • 15:56:27
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.