Great notes, really helped me with some revision this week. WELL DONE
- 13/02/2005
- 11:25:14
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
nice essay!!!! covered a lot of groung really well. well done
- 27/01/2005
- 14:26:53
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Excellent essay, doing same topic ,myself and it seems that you have amply covered all aspects, You have not mentioned intelligence though. I will definately cite you in my next assignment,,,,well done
- 24/01/2005
- 05:29:22
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
whoever u are! have you actually read this?Have you read all the other comments left? *I think you had better go back to school and sort it out u sad little illiterate person. How dare u lose language such as that, go away and hassel your 4th grade tutor cos thats what age you are acting.
- 23/01/2005
- 10:41:41
- Score: 30 out of 37 people found this comment useful.
Wheres your introduction outlining objectives? content good but lacks structure, basic writing skills are required, paragraphing etc. A conclusion is neede to fianalize your statements
- 23/01/2005
- 03:19:43
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Basis writing skills need to be addressed, paragraphing sentence structure etc. Content good but an introduction is necessary to outline objectives. Remain impersonnel though never write us We or I.
- 23/01/2005
- 03:16:33
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
a really informative essay yet it lacks direction. i feel a conclusion would have been really useful. Bringing the key points to the forefront of the readers mind. Also perhaps a precice introduction outlineing your essays intentions, would have tempted the reader in to the essay bulk. All in all it shows good research and essay writing practice but needs some tweeking here and there well done!
- 22/01/2005
- 06:18:31
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
well done John your analysis is brilliant, lovely smooth flw with an interesting introduction. Your writting keeps the chilling feeling in the work, couldn't have done this better myself..brill!
- 22/01/2005
- 01:59:12
- Score: 22 out of 28 people found this comment useful.
I really enjoyed this, brilliantly written, you have been able to keep the writing tight and excellent use of words you seem to use them as each one is as important as the last, without wasting them.This has a superb flow. I congratulate your work well done.
- 22/01/2005
- 01:55:38
- Score: 21 out of 23 people found this comment useful.
really good poem. very much enjoyed, even if u have little or no poetry backround of interest this you HAVE to read to the end. well done!
- 22/01/2005
- 01:48:18
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
i'm currently researching the theories and the perpectives on the family and the effectit has on society myself. I found this essay most infomative and read it to the end. I congratulate you on your research and the way you have presented your essay well done!!!
- 08/01/2005
- 04:03:51
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
this is excellent your use of paraphrasing and your quotes are exceptional cant wait to read the next one..........BRILL
- 05/01/2005
- 08:17:49
- Score: 47 out of 53 people found this comment useful.