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Stem Cell- clearly describes the benefits of stem cell research to modern medical research and advancement- done for a high school Anatomy/Physiology class-5 pages
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Francis H.C. Crick, and his amazing discoveries throughout his lifetime contributing to molecular biology as we know it today
- 835 words (3 pages)
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Describes Anthrax, the different types and what it does to a person that gets it, and how a person gets it- 5 pages- done for a High School Anatomy Class
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Summary of Joseph Stalin in power
My comments are one, make fewer paragraphs with more information, and two, add more points in his life of power, and cut back on the details of the points you mentioned. I like how the over all essay flows, but it makes for hard reading if there are only maybe 3-5 sentences per paragraph. I realize that this is a summary, but you should cover more information with less detail. i like the way you wrote this essay.- 20/06/2002
- 15:57:35
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