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A Critique on Magic's Pawn by Mercedes Lackey. It is a book review/report done for an English 10 class.
- 555 words (2 pages)
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An Essay on the movie Rudy about what made him be able to get on the Notre-Dame football team.
- 760 words (3 pages)
- 34
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A biography on John Lawrence Wargrave from Agatha Christie's And Then There Were None
- 490 words (2 pages)
- 12
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An analysis of the metophorics themes in the book "Obasan" written by Joy Kogawa
- 1063 words (4 pages)
- 46
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This essay is very well done, but there is a problem in the first paragraph. A very weak thesis statement. The transition sentences are a bit weak and using "In conclusion" for the conclusion is a very low level way of ending an essay. Overall this essay covers the racism and animal connection very well.- 16/01/2005
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