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  • Good job!

    It contains some 'dead words' such as "things", you could possibly replace those with more descriptive words such as "stunts". Overall, great job, especially for one your age.
    • 30/01/2005
    • 16:02:06
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.