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To Cheat or Not to Cheat? - A Philosophical Decision Utilizing Kantian Reasoning
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The Chicano Movement Subject: Art Movements
- 1841 words (7 pages)
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Aftermath
- 812 words (3 pages)
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Dispute Resolution in the People's Republic of China
- 1628 words (7 pages)
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The Metamorphosis: The Potrait Of Kafka's Life
- 2284 words (9 pages)
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The Parthenon: Athenian Victory
- 2588 words (10 pages)
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Crito And the Lessons to be Learned from his Failed Attempt to Save Socrates
- 1801 words (7 pages)
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Plessy v. Ferguson and Brown v. Board of Education
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Kantianism and Act Utilitarianism
- 1794 words (7 pages)
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The Mind-Body Problem Continued: Functionalism Takes a Stab
- 1006 words (4 pages)
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Descartes' Meditations
- 1437 words (6 pages)
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Book Review - Brian J. Cook -" Bureacracy and Self Government"
- 2353 words (9 pages)
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Ethics Case Study - Accepting Meals and Contributions in the Healthcare Industry
- 1181 words (5 pages)
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Montesquieu - "The Persian Letters" - The Parable of the Troglodytes and Its Relation to Forming a Government
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Tocqueville - "Democracy In America"
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Book Review - Selznick - Leadership in Administration
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Case Analysis - Public Health vs. Privacy Rights, in Neonatal HIV Testing
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Book Review - Khademian - "Working with Culture"
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What is and what should be the role of government and the bureaucracy?
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How do politics affect the bureaucracy? What lessons can we learn from theory about government and the bureaucracy?
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How does structure affect the bureaucracy? What lessons can we learn from theory about government and bureaucracy?
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How did the U.S. health care system develop, and how has this led to problems in the current system?
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What role do diseases and longevity play in policy development? What has been the role of managed care and attempts at reform in health policy?
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Comments List
Grammar/incorrect word usage
Sentence 1, paragraph 1:The English language is a subject that has arisen as a controversial over the last few decades-awkward sentence, suggest: has been surrounded by controversy? - either way controversial is incorrect.Similar erros can be found within the rest of the essay. Review grammar and word usage.Other than that, good opinion essay.Paragraph 1, sentence 3: Only one thing can be for sure though; it is defiantly something that is worth taking a deeper look at to get some true facts and opinions.Defiantly: should be definitelyParagraph 2, sentences 2 & 3: Although English is still our main language in the United States. Many feel it has been downgraded in its importance due to the amount of slang and other common slanders its users today have stemmed from it.-Fragment: combine the two, replace the period after United States with a comma- 25/04/2006
- 08:09:33
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Domestic Violence (The Women of Juarez, True Tales From Another Mexico by Sam Quinones)
Well thought out essay! The grammar is a little rough.In more formal papers (though I'm not sure what type of class/assignment this was written for) it is better to remove contractions.I agree with all your ideas. Women are forced to deal with sexual tension and inequailities even today.One more suggestion: In the conclusion there are a lot of questions. Perhaps turning them into statements would solidify your ideas and make a stronger point.- 27/01/2005
- 02:40:36
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.