I thought this was a well thought out essay, and I especially liked that the works cited were well in order and easy to find and understand.
- 21/08/2005
- 01:22:36
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I think that this is a pretty decent essay. A slight bit dull and simply technical, but I think the author explained the "technojargon" rather well. Overall, I'd agree with the grade level (10th grade level). Good job!
- 21/08/2005
- 01:13:09
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I'd never thought about alot of that before. I thought your essay was informative, well thought out, interesting, and fun to read. Nice job!
- 04/02/2005
- 21:38:06
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I'd say this is an average essay. Has some grammar mistakes, and some vague topic points. Add some more details with better explanations, and watch the grammar, and it'd be alright.
- 04/02/2005
- 21:25:28
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.