Everything you state in your essay is true (sometimes a litte out of date, but the essay is already 8 years old, so it's not too bad), but you really need to work on spelling and grammar - for me as a native German speaker it was sometimes hard to read.Also, what does the title have to do with the rest of the essay? I do not see any relation there.But altogether it seems ok.
- 03/03/2005
- 07:33:29
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I really liked this essay and found it very usefull. Repetition seems to be the only problem but except for that I think its a really good essay. I would have wished for more examples (where did you see what u found out?).
- 02/03/2005
- 13:15:04
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Good analysis of the character "Fool" in Shakespeare's "King Lear", good point. But watch out for stylistic mistakes (quotes are usually cited line by line, not as one text; repetition of "The Fool" at the beginning of sentences).
- 01/03/2005
- 08:40:54
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