This not only made me laugh, but it made sense, and it was very interesting. I commend you for taking such an interesting topic and for displaying it in such a diverse manner.
- 18/03/2005
- 12:41:40
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good opinions, a nice collection indeed. I suggest using a spell check, you have some mistakes like letters missing from words that should be picked up with a spell checker. Otherwise it looks nice.
- 18/03/2005
- 12:38:28
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I first noticed some areas that didnt seem to flow too well, but the story is so unique and intriguing, with a splash of hope at the end of the dark tale, that it works for me anyway.
- 18/03/2005
- 12:32:30
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I believe this is the best essay I have read on here yet. In the past I was under the impression that feminists were anti-men, anti-childbirth anti-everythings who were too negative, and I -never- wanted to be associated with that, but as I got older I realized that I dont have to be like that to stand up for my own rights as a woman, and I will now gladly take the title of a "feminist". I believe this essay should go further in educating woman on their rights, and how they do not have to be any of those stereotypes to stand up for their rights!
- 18/03/2005
- 12:23:03
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I found this very interesting, and it caught my attention from the start. It almost made me angry to read about how woman were/sometimes still are treated.
- 18/03/2005
- 12:13:44
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what?
- 18/03/2005
- 12:09:10
- Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I especially love your critiques on the gay marriage scenerio. I am a strong supporter of it, and what you say is VERY true! anyone giving a negative rating to this needs to look at their reasons why. I cant see any reason for it besides a contrasting belief [which is no reason for a negative rating, anyway!] and so i leave you with ---> BRAVO!
- 18/03/2005
- 12:02:17
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very good essay - good facts, good writing, overall good job. :)
- 10/03/2005
- 22:28:02
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
that just confused me. the start was .. really abrupt. I'm still a bit unsure what you are talking about...??? oh well. nice job on everything else hehe
- 09/03/2005
- 20:08:33
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.