User Details For: Cptn_Sargos

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  • Watch the "spinach" words

    This person uses the wrong "there". He is supposed to put a different one. Exapmle:Also, many students' today need programs for there school work, which in turn is expensive.The "there" should be ""their".
    • 10/04/2005
    • 20:01:40
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Too short! Only useful for notes!

    this writing had basic ideas, and that's about it. This writing needs to be way more lengthy in order to be a complete assignment. It would only b e useful for notes for a similar asignment (like a cheat-sheet). I would add more details and facts to the four spheres in order to make it more interesting.
    • 31/03/2005
    • 17:23:11
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.