I can't spell opinion. Sorry. Just one of those words I never get right.
- 14/11/2005
- 15:02:45
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Looking back, it occurs to me that you are correct: there actually are zero run-ons in your analysis. Huh. When I originally read over it I was tired, (you know how finals week can be) and I can only assume that what I was referring to was your section on the structure of the poem, which I don't find very relevant to your topic and seems sort of choppy. That is not to say that it is grammatically incorrect; on the contrary, it is very well written. I apologize for my inaccurate comment.
- 11/05/2005
- 22:11:53
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In addition to this being one of the best papers I have yet to read on here, I have to say that the quote you used from your father in the opening paragraph is very profound and truthful. I am going to quote it in a paper I am writing about modern global conflict. Thank you!
- 11/05/2005
- 22:02:10
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Thank you for sharing your work. Not many people tackle writing on this topic. You did so with ease and expertise! :) (I always get overexcited when I actually find exactly the information for which I was searching...)
- 10/05/2005
- 23:11:25
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You have very good interpretations of your subjects and write very well. The only thing that I would work on if I were you is the run-on sentences. We all do it occasionally, and all your information is good, and goes together, however, most teachers/professors REALLY frown on that. Your ideas are great though! Keep up the good work!
- 06/05/2005
- 23:29:59
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For the breath of fresh air. So many poetry analysis do not cover all the bases and explain terms. This was not just a good essay, it was informative and interesting!
- 06/05/2005
- 23:24:17
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I was actually doing an essay on deforrestation, but this one changed my mind. Great Job!
- 04/05/2005
- 22:03:30
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This is a good essay, but would be great with smoother wording :)
- 04/05/2005
- 22:01:29
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What an incredible amount of work this must have been! Thank you for sharing!
- 04/05/2005
- 21:59:24
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This is just the kind of outside viewpoint I was looking for. Thanks!
- 04/05/2005
- 21:55:22
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