Many things weren't brought up in the movie that were in the book and I'm glad you mentioned them. You forgot to mention some of the main diferences, like in the first movie when they were trying to get to the Soceror's Stone, the movie didn't include all of the obstacles they had to pass. Overall it was a good essay.
- 13/07/2005
- 13:33:45
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Good information but it looks like you just copied a timeline, it doesn't look like an essay.
- 28/06/2005
- 13:16:14
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
It was organized well but it lacked a lot of information.
- 28/06/2005
- 13:14:09
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It had good information so that even if you had never heard of O'keefe before, you could still understand the essay. It might be better if you described some of her paintings so that people who haven't seen then could get a feel of what they're like. Overall it was a well organized, informative essay.
- 28/06/2005
- 13:11:25
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
It might've been better if you gave more of an explanation of what you were writing about. If you haven't read the story, you might not understand this summary.
- 28/06/2005
- 12:57:47
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.