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  • Straightend me out

    straight forward and to the point, your essay told me the facts that i needed to know with out the normal amount of useless wording that comes along with it
    • 24/07/2005
    • 04:00:14
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • A journey through the pages

    i enjoyed reading the essay, very well writted and displays a deep message that i found to be quite forfilling at times and thoughtfuli highly recomend this eassay for readingyour trulychibikai
    • 24/07/2005
    • 03:50:50
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Raod signs? what road signs

    i loved reading this piece, and i fully agree with you on a few things. keep writing i look forward to reading your next piece
    • 02/06/2005
    • 05:51:44
    • Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Spell check

    within your essay writing try not to always use the same words to describe the situation. i.e americans could be changed to: american people, population ect.you also may want to make sure of your typing spell check is great if your in a hurry but if you've forgotten a letter (i.e not----no) then your sentences don't make too much sense.keep writing, i wish you the best,chibikai
    • 01/06/2005
    • 05:14:39
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Well formated

    i enjoyed reading through your essay, it was well structured, and easy to understand, at the moment i'm a highschool student in australia who's doing a course in biology and i found you essay to be of great help to me
    • 01/06/2005
    • 05:06:45
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.