I accidentally submitted two essays.I didn't want the capital letters on the title
- 09/07/2004
- 18:05:09
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Yeah , i read your essay. i actually have one of those signs of a OCD. For some reason I always count from 51 to 61 by 3's like 51+3 54+3 57+3 60+1
- 09/07/2004
- 18:02:26
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
hey, I learned a lot from your essay. I can't beliegve you didn't get a 100% on it!
- 09/07/2004
- 17:50:36
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I liked the essay, but if that was for a grade i would give you a B-. you needed to add depth to your story about how the robot has helped us already, and how it will. Your essay was about 'ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE' but artificial intelligence is much more than the fact that robots will never have their own "REAL" feelings due to a lack of neurons and that the only feelings would be synthesised wiuth a CP. Artificial intelligence also includes the fact that robots can read credit card numbers (A.K.A. atm machines etc.), do mathematics (A.K.A. calculators). Those are also forms of AI that you should of included in your report and I am also sure that there are many more forms of AI that i didn't state and that weren't stated in your essay.
- 24/06/2003
- 08:39:08
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
You're essay was OK. But all in all, it just your opinion. But i do think you're right that it decreases fighting and gangs, i all for that.I also think that if people don't like you why should you be their friend, clothes or not?Good essay!
- 06/08/2002
- 09:29:31
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Your essay was good. I can't believe they ruled it "unconstitutional". In school i feel we should have the right to to do the pledge of allegiance or not. NOW, they are saying that we can't do it at all, that is bologna, stupid government. That is not fair to the children who like doing it.
- 05/08/2002
- 15:28:05
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
i would like to know more about subrahmanyan chandrasekhar. I did a report on him in school and his life was exciting.I just wanted to know if you could give more information on him, it would be really interesting
- 05/08/2002
- 00:37:41
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Your essay was out of my league, if u haven't submitted this, go for it, your teacher would probably understand it,fantastic essay! Hitler got what he deserved.
- 04/08/2002
- 14:53:27
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
You sound very conceited, the story was fairly done, but, you sound like a wannabe a teacher. You sound like you don't even like kids. If you want to be a teacher you have to like kids.
- 04/08/2002
- 14:48:16
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
That was great last line blew me away.You should have put more of his chilhood and schooling in the essay though!
- 01/08/2002
- 00:46:46
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I watched the movie and it was not that good, but exciting all the same. good report but you didn't get into the movie really that much. you should have taken the time to think it out and put in a more information.Nice report!
- 31/07/2002
- 22:12:15
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I like the orchestra/classical music just like you.I think that must of been a great concert,i wish i was there.trying different ways to entertain the audience is always great!
- 31/07/2002
- 14:45:39
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Your essay was fairly done, but, you should have said more about how computers can sometimes can not be as great as they seem.You were just talking plainly about computers. Next time try to explain the pros @ cons of computers.In all your report was "Good" i'd give it a 5/10!!!!!
- 30/07/2002
- 15:39:53
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.