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  • Not bad, covers some good point but...

    There are a few spellning mistakes in this essay, also a couple of sections which don't make a lot of sense, so I reccomend re-wirting areas. It covers the main areas connected to the downfall of prohibition in america, and looks at how it did the opposite of what it hoped. It discusses how it fuled both organised and common crime and also how corrupt america was at the time - from polics officer to judge. Good use of relevant dates and statistics. Also, for the English of us out there, don't forget to change localised spellings.
    • 08/10/2006
    • 08:03:23
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.