well done paper, appropriate choice of wording, nice flow of paragraphs, would get an A even at a master's level!!
- 18/01/2009
- 12:03:51
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I enjoyed reading it. Well written, smooth transitions between issues presented. All this information could be used to develop a great pamphlet on the topic for those having problems with sleep.
- 09/01/2009
- 21:21:46
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it's interesting. well supported stand point, strong arguments. The paper presents many good points on the topic, but it needs some touch ups. several facts/statements/words are unnecessarily repeated too many times, ex: first paragraph has the word embryo in it too many times. 5th paragraph first and last sentences state exactly the same, only the words are in different order. Otherwise it's good.
- 09/01/2009
- 21:10:48
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Nicely written, easy to read. I like the chronological representation of evolution of surgery. Good job!
- 09/01/2009
- 20:49:40
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