I love this essay as I studied Nelson Mandela and the information we studies was not nearly as engaging as this peice, well done.
- 05/06/2006
- 06:47:40
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This essay is set out well enough structurally, but lacks the facts to support the claim that anorexia is a cure for obesity. I would recommend you write about the many medical problems an anorexic has since you did so for obesity. Anorexia is a disease, not a lifestyle. Most who try to be 'ana' end up gaining weight after they realise how it destroys their life, but by then their metabolism is already destroyed.
- 03/06/2006
- 00:10:57
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I found this quite interesting to read and horrifies me to hear of the University of Oregon's experiment! :( I liked your opening quotation of Gandhi, it seems to be very effective for setting the feel of the following essay.Is there a reason there are differences with the line spacing? For example, more impact for the single line spaced paragraph?
- 02/06/2006
- 23:51:06
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I like how this essay was written, informative but also interesting to read. I am a first born myself, so the title grabbed my attention and your writing covered much information.
- 31/05/2006
- 17:11:08
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