By the way I would like to point out that you should have put out the complete title of the poem which is "DULCE ET DECORUM EST" and not "Dulce Est Decorum..."
- 05/03/2006
- 17:03:50
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This essay provided a satisfying depth into the poem "Dulce Et Decorum Est" but failed to show any organization whatsoever. While the content and information, as well as information, this essay/paragraph fails to show any train of thought.
- 05/03/2006
- 16:49:26
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I find this essay informing, interesting, and most importantly, current. There wasn't any grammer problems that I could find and the length and vocabulary choice shows the author's intelligence. The only thing missing from this essay is what women today are doing to prevent rape crimes. Otherwise this essay is pretty nice.
- 28/08/2005
- 13:32:08
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is truly a great analysis of a great book. I did not see the comparison of the Mockingbird and these 2 characters until I read this article. It's all starting to fit in and make sense. This essay was a real work of art as well, no grammer mistakes, my attention towards every word never ceased, and you can tell from the writing that the author of this essay was self-motivated and did their best. And to wrap this comment up in one word: WOW!
- 28/08/2005
- 13:18:00
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You have a nice way of thinking. And story is not as bad as well. I find the end to be a little ironic and the poem seems to have a perfect cliche. A few grammer problems, but otherwise it's very good.
- 23/08/2005
- 22:33:31
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay is very lengthy and very educational. It could use a little more enthusisasm. It's mostly straightforward but it's good. Pretty good from my standards.
- 23/08/2005
- 22:26:06
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
OH MY GOSH. This is the best thing I've read all day. It's so professional and so perfect. I've tried as hard as I could and I couldn't find any mistakes or problems. There were no sentence fragments, every sentence had a purpose, and there were no idiotic repeats. My attention was grabbed in so many places and... I have no time for complements because they will keep coming. Great, no, PERFECT job and keep this kind of writing coming.
- 23/08/2005
- 16:38:18
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Although this essay fails to grab my interest and fascination, I must say that the information collected here is impressive. There are a few grammer problems here and there but nothing too serious. This essay is also pretty straightforward in the first paragraph, but other than that I'd say this essay is far above average.
- 21/08/2005
- 22:37:12
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I admire the fact that you read the book and it slightly shows in your writing. But you emphasize the fact that it is a romance way too much. You summarized the story and I still couldn't make much sense of it. You put poor detail on how this story has a love theme and describing the storyline. I can barely understand the plot you describe and how these characters fit in in all this writing. I'm sorry if this essay was actually meant for people who already read the book or the guidelines you followed prevented me from understanding it, but unless otherwise, nice try and better luck on your next essay.
- 21/08/2005
- 22:24:09
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.