Well explained.. well detailed.. and really well researched!!..
- 04/10/2006
- 01:01:27
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I know there may not be much info there..but for my assignment, there was a 1000 word limit on there..they wanted to see how much info we can put into as less as possible..I guess that is a challenge
- 20/08/2006
- 16:51:59
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Could have provided an organisation as an example.
- 11/04/2006
- 08:34:37
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You didn't have to do any references? But yes, it's very descriptive and hardly any analysis..it seems like a big copy and paste job..
- 29/03/2006
- 05:48:06
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Not bad, you could've pointed out a bit of Machiavelli too, he's very similar to Hobbes,also with Locke, he had a really strong view of 'democracy'. But I studied Locke and Hobbes upon business which is different.. :/..but yeah.. keep up the good work.
- 29/03/2006
- 05:38:45
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Good work to see you researching so much about the Chinese Culture.I've been to China myself, and it is sad to see that this is actually true.But maybe an analysis of how the problem may be fixed would be good. :)overall good work!
- 29/03/2006
- 05:32:46
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You've covered the cons of stress but did you actually know that stress can have advantages..Motivation to work is actually caused by stressed...for example, oh no my assignment due in 3 days.. stressing hard, but you have to do it!..to find more info about this, I used this book from uni, Organisational Behaviour,by S Robbins, B Millet and T Waters-Marsh.Top knotch book about human behaviour
- 29/03/2006
- 05:28:44
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I honestly think that you should've gathered more information than just 2 texts.In my university, a proper essay should have at least 8 different references.overall.. A good effort
- 07/03/2006
- 03:16:59
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I don't understand why you only scraped your pass, unless you're doing something like a PhD.. then it's understandable.. anyway.. keep up the good effort.. 51% grade for this information is too low.
- 05/09/2005
- 20:33:40
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.