Pretty useful, good information.
- 30/09/2005
- 23:47:39
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Good essay that told a lot of information in a professional matter. This used simple and to the point sentences. Had a lot of good information but it lacked a conclusion. Otherwise it was a good essay.
- 21/09/2005
- 23:05:54
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Pretty good at telling what the French had to do with Arkansas. It included a fair amount of good information.
- 21/09/2005
- 23:02:57
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You need to put more examples and explain why the use of computers is the best for that particular example. Otherwise, I thought it was ok but not too informative.
- 21/09/2005
- 23:01:06
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Excellent essay! I was impressed at the knowledge that you expressed in it.
- 17/09/2005
- 22:17:23
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Informative and directly to the point. Need more examples and stuff to make it better though.
- 17/09/2005
- 22:12:39
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No real enthusiasm in this essay, it mearly stated things. If this was an AP essay for chemistry that would be fine.
- 17/09/2005
- 22:10:42
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It was ok for just a explanation of what happened. It didn't really make it interesting for the reader, so my suggestion would be to use more catchy things that would grab my attention.
- 17/09/2005
- 22:08:36
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Pretty good, I liked it. I liked the rhymes.
- 17/09/2005
- 16:08:31
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Didnt really have much zing to it, wasn't really that enjoyable to read.
- 17/09/2005
- 16:05:47
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.