The paper is organized well.
- 28/01/2007
- 15:40:43
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Great essay with interesting statement and good job including references!
- 05/03/2006
- 21:37:33
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Great job explaining a theory that is sometimes difficult for some to understand.
- 05/03/2006
- 20:41:22
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I like how you have each topic in outline form. You were very specific in your explanations and examples.
- 02/03/2006
- 23:59:26
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The table of contents is one of the best I've seen. It really gives a look into what the rest of the essay is about.Great Job!
- 26/01/2006
- 15:49:59
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"Remember the Titans" is one of my favorite movies and I never realized the leaders, changes and what each one represented. Great job!
- 07/01/2006
- 14:30:27
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Most of the essay was great and it touched on many marketing aspects, however, there should have been a conclusion that summarized McDonald's marketing strategy.
- 07/01/2006
- 14:25:57
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay covered every aspect of marketing, communication, strategy and the basic SWOT. Excellent!
- 07/01/2006
- 12:35:54
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
The results of your experiment were interesting. I have read studies where experiments are done comparing the job opportunities for people that are average looking and people that are considered attractive. The results are amazing.
- 05/01/2006
- 00:06:18
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay provides an excellent overall explanation on many marketing aspects. I love the comparison between McDonald's and Starbucks. It does seem that McDonald's is trying to stay competive with offering WIFI and "gourmet coffee".
- 02/01/2006
- 22:12:53
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Thank you for this! It is an excellent template for a business plan. There are many aspects to consider and you have covered them all!
- 27/12/2005
- 18:38:31
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This essay provides a great explanation for a topic that is difficult to understand for some. The cost and savings section really shows reasons for this type of standard of quality.
- 13/12/2005
- 11:34:32
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
References would make your essay much more credible.
- 20/11/2005
- 16:14:37
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Lots of info, but the essay needs references and paragraphs to show new ideas and thoughts.
- 20/11/2005
- 00:44:05
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I realize the advertising the essay was about was mainly "television" but readers need to understand there is more to advertising than just ads on TV that interupt sitcoms.
- 20/11/2005
- 00:38:23
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Introduction is great and good references too!
- 11/11/2005
- 00:57:49
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Great info on the Five Forces. Thanks!
- 27/10/2005
- 19:42:00
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Good intro and nice ending, but I agree with Keir, we need to see references.
- 23/10/2005
- 10:07:44
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Cute and Sweet story. I like the details and the flow of the story.
- 22/10/2005
- 15:13:51
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The effort (especially for 6th grade) is evident and I am impressed.
- 22/10/2005
- 15:10:32
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I like both the intro and the ending. Nice high school essay.
- 22/10/2005
- 15:03:56
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Great essay on IBM's decision on outsourcing. Nice example of both benefits and negative aspects.
- 22/10/2005
- 15:01:16
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Interesting you have problems about a Bible reference about spanking but yet, you have an essay about discipline in schools. Don't you think discipline should be taught at HOME first???
- 20/09/2005
- 17:27:44
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I think this is a great essay. I always thought spanking should be used as a last resort, but I know what you mean. I know couples that choose not to spank and their kids are heathens! As you said, spanking, when done with love and care for the child will allow them to grow into responsible adults.
- 16/09/2005
- 10:20:50
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Money 101 should be taught to SEVENTH graders. I work for a mortgage company and it's amazing to me that people make the BIGGEST purchase of their life and they don't have a clue about it.
- 12/09/2005
- 20:21:32
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I would like to know where you located the statistics for your essay.
- 12/09/2005
- 19:58:48
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
As President Clinton said in one of his speeches, "There is no magic wand the government or organizations can wave to bring about lasting racial conciliation...it will require us to close the book on our past, and turn a new page in history...this is primarily, now, a journey of the heart." I agree with his statement. The work comes from within when considered diversity and race relations.
- 12/09/2005
- 19:48:29
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Well written and informative! Thanks.
- 12/09/2005
- 19:41:16
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Many English teachers (High School) allow students to submit "creative writing" as a fun type project to get kids excited about writing. (Remember the ole "Tell me what you did this Summer" essay?) Although this looks like something from Hanan's diary, it's still creative, expresses her opinion well and gives examples.
- 11/09/2005
- 08:46:01
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
With attention lately being placed on obesity (especially children and obesity) this artcile really helps explain the reasons Americans think and act the way they do.Good work.
- 10/09/2005
- 17:30:35
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.