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  • Such potential to be great.

    This is an okay essay, but it could be great. I think that the grammar needs quite a bit of work. Also, this essay improves in quality, then descreases. The introduction paragraph is poorly written. Something must be done to improve this essay.
    • 18/06/2006
    • 07:18:17
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.