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Essay List
Alpha, Beta, and Gamma: The Divisions of Girl World.
- 1212 words (5 pages)
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MacKinlay Kantor's "Andersonville".
- 2870 words (11 pages)
- 27
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MacKinlay Kantor's "Andersonville."
- 2870 words (11 pages)
- 13
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Sanctuary (A Descriptive Essay of a Place or Moment in Time).
- 440 words (2 pages)
- 55
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Cricket (Descriptive Essay, meaningful object that I no longer have).
- 563 words (2 pages)
- 25
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Back Handspring Solutions (Process Analysis Essay).
- 471 words (2 pages)
- 23
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Comments List
It's ok....
This essay is ok, but you really need to work on your clarity of topic. I know it's boring, but focus on outlining before you start writing. One thing that helps me is to write each individual topic on notecards, that way I can reorganize the topics at will.- 30/11/2005
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