This essay could use some filling out, it's a good starting point. This paper can be submitted.
- 08/05/2009
- 02:20:58
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average paper, could use more citing, but overall well written. This paper can be submitted.
- 08/05/2009
- 02:19:54
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nicely constructed essay, well cited and no apparent spelling or grammar errors. :-)
- 08/05/2009
- 02:17:41
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The essay overall is ok but the citations are awkward and there are some grammar issues.
- 29/04/2007
- 20:47:23
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This essay is decent but it definitely needs to be proof read, poor grammar and there are a fair amount of miss spellings. The essay also lacks structure.
- 17/04/2007
- 15:57:11
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well organized and cited. Very useful.
- 07/12/2006
- 10:59:32
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Well researched and full writing. I found no terrible spelling or grammer errors.
- 05/12/2006
- 12:49:53
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I understand it's for a tech. class but it could have a little more substance rather than just straight dry facts. Nicely organized.
- 29/11/2005
- 00:20:13
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well written and well supported. You have some great ideas and you back them up well. Nice job.
- 29/11/2005
- 00:17:12
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
...it could be written better. Very well researched, lots of great info.
- 28/11/2005
- 23:23:21
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.