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  • Just some tips.

    This essay has some valid points, however, it could easily be improved greatly if you were to use more formal diction. Lose the personal pronouns and contractions and the essay will be quite good!
    • 07/12/2005
    • 17:23:11
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.