I feel that this was well written but more of a descriptive essay, there's not a lot of psychological evidence in it. Would have found it stronger if evidence and theories were included, very well written though
- 13/05/2008
- 08:05:35
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I like the way the essay touches on all aspects of the disease not just the neurological side but how it effects others within society. It is well rounded and really good to read
- 05/02/2008
- 08:45:53
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This essay draws upon some very valid points and provide evidence to back them up however it seems rather short and missing a conclusion which would have brought it all together. Good read though
- 05/02/2008
- 08:42:20
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Well Structured, information is clear and concise and the paragraphs lead on well from each other. Great resource.
- 21/01/2008
- 17:56:17
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Good start to the essay but becomes a bit muddled at the end, no clear conclusion structure wise.
- 15/01/2008
- 18:02:18
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Extensive research completed and well structured. Provides a clear, easy to read understanding of how theory explains social problems
- 15/01/2008
- 18:00:12
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Found this really helpful as provided both evidence for and against theories and had a well rounded conclusion!
- 07/01/2008
- 11:03:27
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You explain the theories well, really easy to read back although I think it could have been stonger if you had provided some criticisms of each. Well done on your research though
- 03/01/2008
- 04:34:41
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I felt that this essay weighed heavily on the common sense and could have mentioned more to do with how much research is done in psychology. Some fantastic points though, well done:)
- 14/10/2007
- 05:06:14
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This is more of a descriptive essay, the question is asking "critically examine" Therefore there should be information regarding challenges to Piaget's theory.
- 06/05/2007
- 06:44:47
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There is a good baseline of the stages of development but as a discussion it would have been stronger if some criticism of Piaget were mentioned i.e Vitogsky.
- 06/05/2007
- 06:25:08
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This essay strongly supports social movements to be good for society but it is important to show both sides of the arguments, in any constructive essay. Ha it mentioned the weak side to social movements, i.e the fact that they are weak, compared to political parties, it would have been stronger. But it is a good read.
- 25/04/2007
- 08:36:35
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This would have shown better understanding if the there were some definition of the terminology rather than just putting the terms in although the process is explained.
- 23/04/2007
- 13:22:53
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This essay provides basic information that covers the key factors to industrialisation but the structure could have been slightly better. Agrarian changes should be talked about first, you do this but then go back to it at the end. This was the first stage towards industrialisation. More could have been said about natural resources (internal and external)
- 15/04/2007
- 04:17:36
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Good explanations but points could have been developed more. Well done.
- 12/04/2007
- 03:19:41
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Good critical analysis, providing evidence to support theory.
- 12/04/2007
- 01:18:24
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This essay gave a very clear and concise explanation of the three levels of power, anyone who doesn't understand power should be able to explain it after reading this.Well done.
- 12/04/2007
- 01:15:38
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Gives a basic description of the stroop effect, although for a report is a little short, more detail within the results and discussion section could give it more strength.
- 14/05/2006
- 08:08:07
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This essay is very descriptive; including up to date issues is very good, although the structure could have been better.
- 19/04/2006
- 14:12:45
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This essay is fantastic gives a really good description of th EU and the history which is important, good evaluation and statics too, well done.
- 19/04/2006
- 14:08:35
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This essay titles says that it is about radical feminism but it kind of discusses feminism as if there is only one type, arguments could have been backed up with research just to make it stronger, its very interesting all the same. Good reading thanks
- 28/03/2006
- 08:50:00
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Good for a brief overview but there could be more input regarding the theory of sex e.g how stoller coined the definition of sex and gender and the difference theories regarding sex such as psycholists assuming it innate. Good description of Gender though.
- 21/03/2006
- 15:08:00
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This describes the basic details of bottom up and top down and the points are very clear but including case studies could have gave it more strength, excellent description though.
- 17/03/2006
- 09:08:18
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I am currently studying this topic at a higher level and found some clear and concise points here, great topic to approach, Well done.
- 14/03/2006
- 20:16:34
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