Actually, I expect you will talk about how television badly influence on culture but not on eye disease
- 15/10/2009
- 10:33:46
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I think these are all copied from reference, but not his own words
- 01/08/2008
- 01:00:17
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Overall, this is a good essay! But maybe if you could deeply explain the use of poetic techniques, such as saying what the poet wan to emphasis by using this metaphor. And giving more examples and explaining more will make your essay perfect.
- 31/12/2006
- 17:32:21
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A father and his son is quite complicated. sometimes a child doesn't really know much the feeling of his parents, either parents don't know ours sometimes. I think we should respect others. That's what I though after reading your notes. Do you agree with me ?
- 21/11/2006
- 04:32:59
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A full- content poem! It is good !
- 22/07/2006
- 03:25:08
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It 's good to divide each section. It is easier to read. Execellent !
- 02/07/2006
- 00:58:12
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Don't be so rude, Keir...I just think that we should give comments on essays but not scolding others. Rude is not a good manner at all.
- 02/07/2006
- 00:54:35
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A very detailed essay! You have done good research! Thar's really good.
- 30/06/2006
- 07:17:42
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Are you living in Hong Kong?
- 31/05/2006
- 07:35:11
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Although your essay is quite short, the essay is detailly analysed the wrting technique of Dickinson. I love this essay.
- 31/05/2006
- 07:23:49
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Two essays on Hamlet and "To be or not to be" speech. Plus a couple of junior school poetry essays, one shorter essay on Emily Dickinson. FUNNY MATCH. An enjoyable essay, too. Great job!
- 31/05/2006
- 07:18:23
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I agree with what Daimos said.
- 31/05/2006
- 06:53:47
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Thank you for your comments !
- 25/05/2006
- 07:52:01
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Your essay is well divided! Each paragraph have a topic sentence above. I think this is really good. Easy for us to know what will be introduced in the following paragraph.
- 25/05/2006
- 07:40:28
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Brilliants~ Good essay! Your points of view are excellent. Besides, I think the government should educate the youngs that sharing hands to others is important ! So more people in future will willing to help others, there will be less poorer.
- 25/05/2006
- 07:35:30
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However, I think as a student if we live far away from our school, having a mobile phone to contact your parents for informing them that we are on our way going back home or staying at school for extra-activities. What do you think?
- 25/05/2006
- 07:24:09
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Increasing of population in China is really a big problem ! Very well written ! Your essay was awesome !
- 12/05/2006
- 07:42:03
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I think you could give your own personal comment on this poem and give some examples in the world nowadays to give envidents on your essay.
- 12/05/2006
- 07:17:00
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I agree Trista, your essay is really good and has analysis detailly. Well done !
- 12/05/2006
- 07:12:20
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I study Literature and this poem is involved in the exam. I think this poem gives out a very important message- telling us that war made people suffer. I hope the world could be peaceful.
- 12/05/2006
- 07:07:15
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I love the book better :)
- 08/05/2006
- 07:34:29
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I think "The Good Morrow" is used for wedding day. It is really a very moving and delicate poem about how loves awakens you to life."seven sleepers' den" is really a strong imagery of telling the readers that persona was asleep in the den until his love came to his life and become his everything, his world.Besides "seven sleepers' den", lots of imagery is used in the poetry, such as "weand", "suck in the country pleasures", etc.I quite enjoy reading this poem as the language used in it is quite straight forward.The poetry is very romantic. It is very touching. I would like to hear my dear read this poem to me when I grow up later.The main theme of "The Good Morrow" is if love equally, their love will not die.
- 10/01/2006
- 07:29:33
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