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I forgot to add, your thesis is kind of weak. Try re-wording it and maybe adding a little more detail.- 13/02/2006
- 18:33:18
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Pretty good
I liked this essay a lot. I look forward to reading more of your work.- 13/02/2006
- 18:28:49
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Pretty good
Well written with good ideas. What sources did you use for this essay? Consider adding a works cited next time.- 13/02/2006
- 18:05:20
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.