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  • Just a thought...

    I read this essay and immediately thought: way too much biographical detail. While some may be relevant to the essay topic, it dominates the essay and basically drowns out the main points made. Good effort but it looks pretty plagiarised; whether I am right or not is another matter.
    • 26/03/2006
    • 05:44:46
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  • Constructive criticism

    -Language used is a little bit colloquial-More paragraphing needed-Writer uses the word 'paradigm' a bit too often-Repetitive in places-Writer asks questions during the essay... you're supposed to answer questions not ask them even if they are rhetoric-Several typing/grammatical errorsOverall, an average essay that needs a bit of editing.
    • 16/02/2006
    • 01:03:35
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.