Ok while I liked the essay, your continual use of the word "Motorola" does get slightly annoying and predictable. Besides that I thought the essay wasn't bad at all.
- 16/02/2006
- 19:08:28
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While the essay was based on a good subject, I believe you could have used spell check, for instance you mispelled "role" wrong in the last paragraph.
- 16/02/2006
- 19:04:03
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Not bad, could have been better though, I liked it.
- 16/02/2006
- 18:59:10
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