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  • Nice

    I enjoyed your essay; and, I found it refreshing that you cited your sources, unlike many others, and included a prologue to the essay. Good work.
    • 04/12/2006
    • 17:29:15
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Not Bad

    The essay was not bad. Good job. It was useful for my research.
    • 19/06/2006
    • 19:12:07
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Could have used it

    This is really well done and covers almost the entire play. I like how you added some quotes that are famous from the play. It would also be awsome if you added some quotes for each theme of the play. Too bad we just finished Macbeth in class. I could have used this :P
    • 23/05/2006
    • 03:42:49
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Images

    It is clear how you attempted to use a lot of images in your writing. I like the fashion. It pulled me in and pushed me out at times. Nicely none.
    • 24/03/2006
    • 00:03:51
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Analysis

    It was a good analysis. It could stand to be more indepth, and some points were repetitive, but overall it was good.Clearly, someone has been watching too much TV lol. Me included :P
    • 02/03/2006
    • 13:46:06
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Well Written

    Clearly well written, and well researched. I enjoyed reading this essay very much.The tone is consistantly uniform, and professional, and the information is conveyed very effectivly.Good Work. Definite Green Face.
    • 02/03/2006
    • 13:37:54
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Good

    Well written and nice flowing. There is a lot of information to digest in one place, good research.The only thing that bothered me was the "In..." "In..." There were MANY In's. I know it's a timeline type of essay.Overall, it was excellent. Green Face.
    • 02/03/2006
    • 13:32:56
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Lays or Pringles?

    I did this lab when I was in grade 11 Biology. It was fun, but there are better.The tables for your results became messed up when pasting here, but that is not your fault.Anyways, the essay, or I should say lab, was very well done. You covered the key points as well as presenting some background information.Finally, this depends on your teacher, but my teacher will dock marks for first person pronouns in a professional lab. So, its up to you and your teacher.Overall, it was good. I hope you get a good mark :P
    • 01/03/2006
    • 23:43:27
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Well Done

    I enjoyed reading this essay. Also, it was the first one I have read here that used referencing. Good job.The quotes were very well integrated, and relevant. I can't really think of any suggestions as there weren't any huge mistakes. The one tiny thing is tense, two verbs were awkward, but other than that, it was excellent.Keep up the good work :)
    • 01/03/2006
    • 23:38:47
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Enjoyable

    I was impressed with your essay as you introduced many thoughtful points that provoked questions for myself.I was very impressed with your use of transitions as they seemlessly joined the paragraphs together.However, try to avoid the use of first person (I, we, you, us), and you have a few grammar mistakes.Green Smilie.
    • 26/02/2006
    • 20:57:30
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Well Done

    I enjoyed reading your essay, it covered ALL mentionable points, and is very well written. I like the way you tie in your points and feelings. However, some quotes were not intregrated very well, it seemed choppy, and you used a few expressions that were lacking.But, overall, the essay has earned a green smilie face.
    • 26/02/2006
    • 20:53:49
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Deemed Brochurable

    Overall, your essay was informative, and you managed to cover most of the main/predominant points.However, you did make a few minute mistakes. First, you failed to remain in 3rd person. It makes the essay sound more professional. You only missed a few, its ok. Also, I didn't see a single transition. It would be a good idea to add a few. Finally, some ideas needed expanding and exaboration to further emphasise your point.Other than that, and a few misspelled words, it was very good.
    • 26/02/2006
    • 20:49:48
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.