I think it was very well written, but stronger orgranization with the sentences would prove it to work out better.
- 01/03/2006
- 14:01:39
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
But Strong. I think it contained enough points and I really learned alot.
- 01/03/2006
- 14:01:10
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It was outlined very well, and I think it contained enough information to be deemed "brochourable". Great essay.
- 01/03/2006
- 14:00:50
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
It was very short, but in that time you managaed to fill in all appropriate points needed for the reader. Organization (see: transitions) could use a little bit of work.
- 01/03/2006
- 13:47:19
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The thesis was very strong, and the quotes fit very well. Overall a great paper.
- 01/03/2006
- 13:46:17
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
It WAS very informative, but organization in the first 3 paragraphs could be used to clean it up a little.
- 01/03/2006
- 13:40:38
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.