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  • Needs some work...

    The essay is ok, but you do need supports, and also, don't use slang. It's "Want to" not "wanna" and the word is "commit" and not "committ." Also, use some commas, they are very helpful parts of the English language. Not a very helpful essay overall...
    • 25/09/2002
    • 15:42:05
    • Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.