A fairly strong start. The intro could've been a bit more precise, instead of seeming to start off in the middle of a conversation. The first three paragraphs were great and made some pretty good points but then it seems like the rest of the essay was left out.
- 26/04/2006
- 16:54:15
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This essay has no information to back up any of the claims --- why would you use those specific methods of marketing to those specific groups (African Americans, Caucasians)? Just because "it seems that they are very into" this or that?Also, Levi's currently does cater to children. A quick visit to their website shows this.The overall organization of the paper needs to be worked on as well. Where is the conclusion? What is your main point?
- 26/04/2006
- 16:50:08
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This essay is precise and informative!
- 26/04/2006
- 15:11:29
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.