This was an excellent proof of the permeable membrane. This could have been made better by defining some of the terms so that people not use to this scientific terminology would understand it. But overall excellent.
- 09/04/2006
- 02:51:21
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The imformation you provided is great but when I read your essay I feel a bit like "says who?" or "where does it say that?" also the sentences dont seem to flow too smoothly with one another. If you add a bit of sources and smooth up the sentences a bit more the quality of yor essay will improve dramatically.
- 07/04/2006
- 09:54:23
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It seems that you just needed to reread what you wrote and support your ideas better; this would be a way better paper. Your language was easy to understand a definate plus!
- 07/04/2006
- 09:48:51
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This is a great short analysis. I think that if you worked on it longer this would be an excellent essay worth a definite A good job!
- 07/04/2006
- 09:45:05
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