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  • Great

    This essay was very inspiring, good job
    • 11/10/2008
    • 16:36:14
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Moving West

    Your basic idea was good but this was poorly written. Please use your spellcheck.
    • 30/11/2006
    • 10:13:59
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Wicca

    My best friend says she's a witch. I never quite understood what Wicca was. Thanks for clarifying it for. Great Essay.
    • 16/11/2006
    • 21:32:32
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Stripper

    I was also a student stripper. I used the profession to pay off student loans and debt. Some people do not know that you can use the profession to also solve problems.Thank you for your insight.
    • 29/10/2006
    • 19:35:12
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Heart disease

    Very imformative.
    • 22/10/2006
    • 22:22:12
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Race

    Short and to the point, good job.
    • 22/10/2006
    • 17:46:49
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nursing

    Awesome! I'm a Nurse, I feel every word the writer is conveying. Great!
    • 09/10/2006
    • 14:50:36
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nursing

    I expected a little more from a High School student. I felt as if he was looking for sympathy. I'm a Nurse and I'm hispanic. I think the writer needs to do a little more research on the subject.
    • 09/10/2006
    • 14:46:32
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Poetry

    I thought your essay had body and depth. I douldn't believe you are a 9th grader. Keep up the good work.
    • 09/10/2006
    • 13:21:24
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Children and TV

    We all know that extensive viewing of television violence by children causes greater aggressiveness. Sometimes, watching a single violent program can increase aggressiveness. Children who view shows in which violence is very realistic, frequently repeated or unpunished, are more likely to imitate what they see.
    • 09/10/2006
    • 13:06:56
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • HELEN KELLER

    I thought this essay was wonderful. My father is deaf and recently blind. Thanks for the inspiration.
    • 21/07/2006
    • 21:00:54
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.