This essay was very inspiring, good job
- 11/10/2008
- 16:36:14
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Your basic idea was good but this was poorly written. Please use your spellcheck.
- 30/11/2006
- 10:13:59
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My best friend says she's a witch. I never quite understood what Wicca was. Thanks for clarifying it for. Great Essay.
- 16/11/2006
- 21:32:32
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I was also a student stripper. I used the profession to pay off student loans and debt. Some people do not know that you can use the profession to also solve problems.Thank you for your insight.
- 29/10/2006
- 19:35:12
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Very imformative.
- 22/10/2006
- 22:22:12
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Short and to the point, good job.
- 22/10/2006
- 17:46:49
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Awesome! I'm a Nurse, I feel every word the writer is conveying. Great!
- 09/10/2006
- 14:50:36
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I expected a little more from a High School student. I felt as if he was looking for sympathy. I'm a Nurse and I'm hispanic. I think the writer needs to do a little more research on the subject.
- 09/10/2006
- 14:46:32
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I thought your essay had body and depth. I douldn't believe you are a 9th grader. Keep up the good work.
- 09/10/2006
- 13:21:24
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We all know that extensive viewing of television violence by children causes greater aggressiveness. Sometimes, watching a single violent program can increase aggressiveness. Children who view shows in which violence is very realistic, frequently repeated or unpunished, are more likely to imitate what they see.
- 09/10/2006
- 13:06:56
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I thought this essay was wonderful. My father is deaf and recently blind. Thanks for the inspiration.
- 21/07/2006
- 21:00:54
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