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  • Add Dimmesdale's penance sessions

    Overall a good essay, but I feel that you need to add a little more to the second body paragraph. Focus more on the Reverend Dimmesdale's penance to add to the illusion of his personal anguish. Although this is a sidenote to the scaffold scenes, it seems almost necessary to plotting his character developement.
    • 29/01/2003
    • 02:52:15
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