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  • Good but here's a penny for your thought...

    The background information lends credibility to what you conclude with; the breakdown by section creates good structure.Suggestions: I would refrain from using "I" in an essay, it sounds like colloquial language.
    • 30/04/2006
    • 11:05:32
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.