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  • Great

    Awesome!!!
    • 23/11/2006
    • 14:55:48
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very interesting to read about this topic!

    I think this paper was very well explained and put together with great ambition. This paper is very informative and understandable. You've got a great style of explaining things. Accurately describes the basic essentials of 'Candide.' Well constructed and with well backed up arguments. Well referenced, with an organized flow throughout the paper.Excellent.
    • 04/10/2003
    • 06:51:36
    • Score: 11 out of 18 people found this comment useful.
  • Sweet Paper

    Created the perfect paper. Conducted an impressive paper. You've pretty much laid all the groundwork for this book. Well Done. Keep up the good work.
    • 18/09/2003
    • 19:13:01
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Very comprehensive.

    Great detail and setup. The language could be a little more approaching at times, but overall a very well guided paper. You're facts seem organized and thoroughly. Great referencing of facts to back up the paper.
    • 11/06/2003
    • 21:06:50
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Glengem, get a clue!

    Dude, did you read the question i posted for that essay? I told you i was limited to two pages. I wasn't allowed to flesh out that much information. Read the question before judging. I understand what I am talking about, and you can get to such a level also if you start studying. Get a clue!
    • 11/06/2003
    • 16:55:39
    • Score: 10 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Good!!!!!!1

    You have taken the time to provide good sources. The paper flowed well and was an easy read. This is a well written essay. A lot was said. Nice structure and well reasoned arguments. Also, the content was great!!!!!!!!!
    • 08/06/2003
    • 13:15:46
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • NOTE:

    If you want to use this paper all you have to do is change the name and state, depending where you come from.
    • 03/04/2003
    • 08:47:41
    • Score: 10 out of 19 people found this comment useful.
  • Well Done!

    This is a good paper, but I think it would of been even better with references. You need to backup you're arguments. Overall, great job.
    • 17/03/2003
    • 18:51:00
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • OKAY

    Short, but good. I liked that it was very straight foward.
    • 17/03/2003
    • 18:47:58
    • Score: 5 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Well written, with solid information and facts supporting your paper. Well Done!
    • 17/03/2003
    • 18:46:17
    • Score: 4 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • NIce work

    This is a well written essay, short, but good.
    • 16/03/2003
    • 11:54:48
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Explain

    How the hell is this a "Term Paper?" Where is you're Bibliography? Very unorganized.
    • 13/03/2003
    • 19:29:50
    • Score: 2 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Great Paper

    A well thought out paper. The drug of choice, be it alcohol or illicit drugs, will continue to tear the nation apart, starting with the family. These issues alone can take up to a lifetime resurrecting and rebuilding, and any peer-involvement is sure to be, and best, invested in these areas. However, in order for this to effectively work, the parents of today also need to be equally educated.As it stands right now, the paper is written very well. You stated facts to back up the arguments.Well Done!
    • 13/03/2003
    • 18:24:41
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Paper

    Very good touch on what is a deep subject. Great paper, but lacks in showing evidence. The material presented in the paper was well.
    • 11/03/2003
    • 21:32:18
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Sounds to me like a lot of information was done on this topic. The body of the paper appears to be alright. Sentence structure and organization can use some help.
    • 11/03/2003
    • 21:27:22
    • Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    I can say with all confidence that your paper is well, and I would recommend it to every single person in cheathouse.
    • 11/03/2003
    • 19:47:53
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Research

    With all the information that has been presented for both sides of the issue, what should we really think of these companies? Are they good or bad? Makes you think, huh? Its all about the money. As to the content of your paper, it was very well written. Good expansion on information used. Very descriptive words.Well Done!
    • 08/03/2003
    • 00:45:02
    • Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    A convincing essay, shows some thoughts, but needs more input, more elaboration. I think more could of been added to this paper. Overall, Okay paper.
    • 08/03/2003
    • 00:28:35
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Content

    ItalianzDoitBest, I agree with you that the intro wasn't needed. As I started reading this piece I became convinced that the intro wasn't needed. This is a very comprehensive and exhaustive issue that the Author presented. Well written, with solid information and facts supporting your paper.
    • 08/03/2003
    • 00:14:16
    • Score: 10 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    I liked that it was very straight foward, getting to the point fast.
    • 05/03/2003
    • 12:43:49
    • Score: 10 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
  • Slick540, nicely done

    Slick540, you got my attention. My professor and I didn't even see that. Good eye. Here is how it should be. If a vehicle goes straight into a solid wall that does not move or deform, the threshold level is about 9 to 15mph, depending on the specific vehicle design. Threshold level will be higher(National Highway Transportation Safety Administration 1).
    • 04/03/2003
    • 19:45:57
    • Score: 17 out of 20 people found this comment useful.
  • Note:

    I have carefully proofread for mechanical errors. My citation forms and works cited forms are accurate in content and form. (Most of the cited information in the paper will not be in the form of direct quotation. Unless a paper is on a literary or linguistic topic, few dierect quotations should be used.)
    • 04/03/2003
    • 15:25:22
    • Score: 15 out of 19 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    More specification is needed to you're work.
    • 04/03/2003
    • 10:56:44
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Very informative

    Well written with a great introduction. How you describe it is very well-built. The specification of this issue is very strong. The paper flowed well and was an easy read. It was clear that the Author had no hesitation in writing it. You have stated nice simple facts, very useful and interesting. From a 1 to 10...I give you a 9.5.Well Done!
    • 02/03/2003
    • 13:33:29
    • Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Correcting my spelling

    7) The closure was excellent.
    • 01/03/2003
    • 13:54:16
    • Score: 12 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
  • Brilliant!

    1) A very detailed explanation of the purpose.2) The amount of time and effort put to write this paper.3) The organization and structure is well.4) Transitions are well.5) Some of the techniques in this paper were ones which I am not familiar with, and the author does a great job of illustrating them.6) The Author clearly covered and described the entire platform.7) The closeure was excellent.8) Well done!
    • 01/03/2003
    • 12:00:39
    • Score: 11 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
  • Not Bad...

    There are some typo errors that need adjustment. There are also gramatical errors and it lacks organization and structure. Some paragraphs could of been more specified.
    • 01/03/2003
    • 00:52:00
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    machoman64, all the papers in here are not crap, I don't know what kind of papers you read. This paper flowed with great transitions from one spot to the other spot. The Author presented good facts for his paper.Well Done!
    • 28/02/2003
    • 10:56:29
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • This paper is well-wriiten!

    Good presentation on abortion. You're opening statement is well put. This piece on abortion follows in good order. I find that you have some sources, which makes it even better of a paper.Well Done!
    • 28/02/2003
    • 10:46:40
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Great paper! Smooth!

    We should have school laws, because overall they would help to make school a better place for kids to see that staying in school will help them in the long run. Laws would help to eliminate economical barriers, and help in raising student's academic achievement. What more could an educator ask for? I have stated some of the benefits. The results of school laws are crystal clear, and our administration and educators would be foolish not to implement them into our school system. Well, we all know we can't make someone stay in school, but maybe one day there will be laws on it, who knows?Well Done!
    • 27/02/2003
    • 11:14:41
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent

    Well wriiten, with a great opening to start the paper flowing. As it stands right now, I have no compliants towards you're paper. Transitions and structuring are intact.Well Done!
    • 26/02/2003
    • 22:50:47
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Smooth-spoken

    The paper itself is structured well, but needs more indepth construction and a better well rounded discussion. However, if it is possible, you could have added a little more. Don't get me wrong it is a persuasive paper. Overall, I like it.Well Done!
    • 26/02/2003
    • 22:34:53
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Great Paper!

    At least you have made paragraphs in you're paper. You stated references in you're paper, and showed the work cited at the end of you're paper. This paper looks even better that you did that because a lot of people submit papers in here, and don't show where they got their work from.Well Done!
    • 26/02/2003
    • 17:10:19
    • Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Work

    This paper provided an informative view on the issue addressed, very well thought out.I also like to say that this paper gives a lot of material, and references to many sources. Nice piece of work, provided a strong foundation.
    • 26/02/2003
    • 14:27:22
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Not bad of a story. Informative paper, and good points made midway through the first paragraph, but lacks a little in the opening paragraph. Overall, I liked it.Good
    • 26/02/2003
    • 13:41:24
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Not Bad

    A convincing essay, shows some thoughts, but I think more could of been added to this essay. It's a well written essay for the most part, I feel more was needed to this paper such as: guidance, support, elaboration, more examples, etc.
    • 24/02/2003
    • 11:48:35
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent

    Great thesis approach! Your choice of wording was very well done. I would say that this paper gives a lot of material, and guides you smoothly thru the entire paper. Provided a great deal of information on Egyptian and Greek culture. Grammar and structure are well. This was a great piece you did.Well Done!
    • 24/02/2003
    • 11:29:37
    • Score: 8 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Paper.

    Well written, with great sentence structure. The Author conducted research on the subject before writing the essay. Organization and transitions are well. You put this together very nicely. Well Done! Keep up the good work!
    • 14/02/2003
    • 10:11:41
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    I can say with all confidence that your paper is well. I think these statements are very well, for whom you are talking about. This is a well organized essay and a good overview. The subject really catches the readers attention and explains it with fine-tunes.
    • 13/02/2003
    • 16:37:15
    • Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Great Paper

    You're paper is very well. I am also a computer major myself. C++ is an object oriented programming languages. Just about everyone agrees that C++ is useful and although it may not be the best object oriented programming language out there, it is certainly here to stay.
    • 09/02/2003
    • 14:37:45
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Iron Paper

    The introduction is introduced very well.kho786, also presented a great overview on agricultural production. You provided background information that is very vital. The structure of the paper is well too.
    • 09/02/2003
    • 14:26:42
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Well Done

    As an extremely happy person, I wanted to thank you for your incredible paper you wrote. You have made an incredible paper. You have help me understand "Slughterhouse-Five." I never thought I would read this paper here. I can say with all confidence that your paper is well, and I would recommend it to every single person in cheathouse.Well Done!
    • 07/02/2003
    • 12:03:55
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Work

    Organization and transitions are well. You put this together very nicely. The statements in between the intro and conclusion are, very well explained. Like a sculpture in progress, your response is an emerging work of art.
    • 07/02/2003
    • 11:52:16
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Provocative.

    Provided a firm paper. Good use of a pursuasive language. I think this paper was very well explained and put together with great ambition. This paper is very informative and understandable. A confident, self-assured paper.Well Done!
    • 07/02/2003
    • 11:33:39
    • Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Job

    Great response paper you did, and plus the way you formatted it was great. Very descriptive, with little words. You present the ideas clearly. Good work, well done!
    • 07/02/2003
    • 11:22:02
    • Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job

    This is a well written essay. From the descriptions, it sounds like you knew you're stuff. Very well organized. Great groundwork.
    • 07/02/2003
    • 11:16:15
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Great job

    Created the perfect paper. Conducted an impressive paper. You've pretty much laid all the groundwork for this book. Well Done.
    • 07/02/2003
    • 11:10:25
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    The Author clearly stated step-by-step facts. Very descriptive words used. By reading this it sounds like you knew what you were talking about.
    • 07/02/2003
    • 11:05:45
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    The paper flowed well and was an easy guided read. The essay itself is structured well. Very Informative.
    • 07/02/2003
    • 11:01:42
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    Your essay was good; however, you left some incomplete gaps. Never leave a question without be finalized properly.
    • 06/02/2003
    • 14:20:23
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    The writer presented good evidence. Judging by this paper, you knew you're facts. Well written, with little errors.
    • 05/02/2003
    • 16:21:50
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    The facts are there, though the paper needs more structure. Overall, nicely done.
    • 05/02/2003
    • 14:57:09
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    I liked that it was very straight foward, getting to the point very fast. Nicely done.
    • 05/02/2003
    • 14:53:15
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Well written, with great introduction. The paper flowed well and was a great read. Very Informative. This paper itselfs is structured very well. Well Done!
    • 01/02/2003
    • 14:18:39
    • Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Great paper!

    I did a similar paper on this a while back, and I agree with you on many things you said. This is put very nicely. Good expansion on information used. Very descriptive words.Well done!
    • 31/01/2003
    • 19:07:49
    • Score: 10 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Informative paper, and good points made midway through the first paragraph, but lacks a little in the opening paragraph. Overall, I liked it very much so.
    • 31/01/2003
    • 10:59:14
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Sounds to me like a lot of information was done on this topic. The body of the paper appears to be well. The book is a great read.
    • 31/01/2003
    • 10:52:55
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Good research, sentence structure is well guided. Introduction and conclusion are, right on target.Well Done!
    • 31/01/2003
    • 10:45:18
    • Score: 18 out of 19 people found this comment useful.
  • Pretty good

    Just a few areas that need attention, but overall, greatly structured,
    • 31/01/2003
    • 10:40:57
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Pretty good

    Provided a great deal of information on witches and the supernatural. Judging by this paper, you knew what you were talking about. Well Done!
    • 30/01/2003
    • 10:39:12
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Well written, with solid information and facts supporting your paper.
    • 27/01/2003
    • 17:03:27
    • Score: 10 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Great paper

    Great detail and setup. The language could be a little more approaching at times, but overall a very well guided paper. You're facts seem organized and thoroughly.
    • 27/01/2003
    • 16:57:58
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    A convincing paper, shows some thoughts, but more elaboration is needed. It needs more context to it. Does not show significant examples to support main idea, much more information is needed. It tends to skip around and neglect topics that are open. Overall, it is good.
    • 27/01/2003
    • 16:48:56
    • Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Good content and information.

    Even though this is a good paper, you should of at least put the sentences together. You have a lot of useful information here. Well written, with good transitions.
    • 27/01/2003
    • 16:32:56
    • Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Well Done.

    Well, I guess this is a great paper...even though I don't understand the language it presents.
    • 23/01/2003
    • 15:49:42
    • Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Clarification!

    Good use of a pursuasive language. I think this essay is very well illustrated and put together with great eagerness. Great critical essay.
    • 23/01/2003
    • 15:40:51
    • Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay Paper...

    This paper flowed out very slow. The writer seemed disoriented and uncertain of the principles. It picked up somewhere in the middle with several cohering paragraphs and then slipped back into the original distraction at the end.
    • 23/01/2003
    • 12:59:35
    • Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Great paper!

    Great paper you wrote! I also have a couple of papers on abortion too. Everyone views abortion differently. Women have been given the right to have an abortion under the United States Constitution, but this right is still being protested by the people that fight for the unborn's rights.Eventually, the abortion issues will vice versa, and people will realize the importance of a fetus, because it is a human being too. I personally believe that the women should have the fianl say.Well Done!
    • 23/01/2003
    • 12:39:31
    • Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Even though the sentence structure could be a little more enhanced...you're paper is well presented.Good!
    • 23/01/2003
    • 12:08:40
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    You're response is great! I like how you said about "To me, after reading about Pham's extraordinary search for his cultural identity, I feel more encouraging to face my turning point in life. To me that was very humble and appreciative.Well Done!
    • 22/01/2003
    • 18:57:13
    • Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    So, I found the speech to be very interesting. I really enjoyed reading this piece, even though I know it aleady. The speech itself is structured okay, but needs more indepth construction and a better well rounded talk.Overall, I like it!
    • 22/01/2003
    • 18:49:21
    • Score: 7 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    I think more could of been added to this paper. Overall, I enjoyed it.
    • 22/01/2003
    • 18:40:59
    • Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    This is an intriguing paper. I like that fact that it has bibliography.Nice Work...
    • 22/01/2003
    • 18:30:13
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Outstanding and Understandable!

    You will find the "FACTS" right on target in this paper. Great job in presenting the facts. The Author clearly stated the perspective of the situation. The evidence shown in this paper concludes that the Author did his research. Well written, with excellent references!
    • 20/01/2003
    • 17:41:00
    • Score: 23 out of 24 people found this comment useful.
  • On Target

    Another great paper! Right on target and very specific. I am please to welcome you to the Cheathouse plan. You have shown your stability in your writing. This user covered and described everything you need to know about "Economic Picture of Great Britain 2003". Great expansion of information you acquired...Great citations also. Superexcellent!
    • 19/01/2003
    • 14:18:26
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    This is a well written essay. A lot was said about the "Sexuality in the Victorian Era". However, they have to be backed up by proof, which you have done. Great job. Well written, with excellent references cited.
    • 19/01/2003
    • 13:55:36
    • Score: 5 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Myqueen77, good reaction paper. This reaction paper appears to be of a good quality, nice job.
    • 19/01/2003
    • 12:42:10
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    You outline this piece very well. You're viewpoint about both poets is approached very nice.Well Done!
    • 18/01/2003
    • 15:54:26
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    Good paper on El Greco. This is an informitive assignment you did. This paper gives a brief description. Well done.
    • 18/01/2003
    • 15:20:53
    • Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Good paper on 'Computers are Changing Everything'!

    Computers are the future whether we like it or not. Computer is a device that follows instructions and makes calculations. Do we think computers will control humans in the future? The answer to that is...probably. Who is smarter? The computer or humans? Remember, it is us people who design them. Therefore, we are the brilliant ones. We defiantly don't want corruption in technology today, because it will be a scary situation in the long run.Well Done! :.Masterpuppet:.
    • 16/01/2003
    • 12:12:34
    • Score: 9 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    This is really a great paper, but it would of look much better if it was broken down into paragraphs. Overall, your paper is of good management. Just your organization structure needs help.
    • 16/01/2003
    • 10:58:06
    • Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Good paper..............

    A Very well thought out paper, plus it flowed smoothly. I really liked your discussion on "The Canadian healtcare system". This paper is of good quality. Very informative.Well Done.
    • 15/01/2003
    • 14:39:12
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    The condition of this paper is very impressive. This paper is flawless. It was clear that the Author had no hesitation in writing it. Examples that you illustrated in your paper shows the stellar qualities of your writing.
    • 15/01/2003
    • 14:31:24
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Well written, with excellent references cited. A lot of research perform to compose this essay. Good structure and use of the language. Your paper served it purpose.Well done!
    • 15/01/2003
    • 13:47:48
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    This paper is well typed and presented paper. The opening was great, you got my attention into reading it. This paper has stimulated my curiousity, making me insist upon more on "Mao".Well Done.
    • 15/01/2003
    • 13:37:25
    • Score: 14 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    His career ended abruptly when he was shot and killed in New York City on Feb. 21, 1965...a very sad epidemic. He was one of the best African-American preachers. He was the American advocate of black nationlism. Malcolm, learned over a period of time that not all whites are evil, he was fully aware that the good whites existed. Malcolm X, just wanted all traces of racism to end. He just wanted everyone to be humble and unified. Other people might disagree in what i have to say, but some people look at Malcolm X...as a person who was teaching hatred.
    • 14/01/2003
    • 20:59:54
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    This is a very good essay...with great references. You put this together very nicely. Good expansion on information used.Good paper back by creditable facts.
    • 14/01/2003
    • 12:23:34
    • Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Good start! I think the essay as a whole is good. I just did a paper on this a while back and I agree with you on many of the things you say. A lot was said about buisness handle. This is a well written essay.
    • 14/01/2003
    • 10:46:42
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job

    As the others have commented, excellent job in grammar and paragraph structure. Your essay effectively supported your paper. You have provided a great deal of information. Overall, it is a nicely structured paper.
    • 14/01/2003
    • 10:34:15
    • Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    This is different. Very creative.
    • 14/01/2003
    • 10:24:49
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • More harmony needed.

    Sorry to be a nuisance to you but, your paper is quite frankly not finished yet. I've also spotted some flaws(typos)to your paper too. You've lacked on argument wise. More plot is needed to this paper. I awarded you a yellow rating.
    • 08/01/2003
    • 17:23:41
    • Score: 11 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
  • No one is perfect!

    What Can I say? No one is perfect. We all make bloopers. So, I made a couple of punctuation errors, who doesn't.
    • 08/01/2003
    • 14:31:12
    • Score: 27 out of 35 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Very informative. Gets to the point without a lot of filler. I applaud you.
    • 08/01/2003
    • 14:22:27
    • Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Note:

    You should of listed where you got your references.
    • 07/01/2003
    • 10:20:17
    • Score: 14 out of 21 people found this comment useful.
  • A change of pace

    At least the Author has humor in him. Its nice to see a change of scenery. Its funny how the two make a big spectacle about things. They love to make up false stories. You have to remember that there is a lot of cock and bull story. The media loves to snatch stories about celebritys...and make loot off it. The media loves to build-up stories. They crave for it. Thats Hollywood!Your story had me laughing.
    • 07/01/2003
    • 00:39:39
    • Score: 11 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
  • Outstanding Paper!

    Significant climatic change has taken placethroughout the years on Earth. It is important to recognize that with the recent warming and the other climatic changes that have been going on have not been related to one another. For example, warming has been greatest over the mid-latitude continents in the winter and spring, with some area of cooling, such as over the North Atlantic Ocean. There is only one way to stop global warming before it becomes a real threat. That way is to stop emitting the greenhouse gases that cause global warming. Only then will the problem of global warming be solved.
    • 06/01/2003
    • 22:10:59
    • Score: 17 out of 20 people found this comment useful.
  • OKAY

    This is a paper that I did for Sociology class. I had to do it oral and written. I wrote this paper a couple of years ago. I received a 90 on it. My writing has enhanced dramatically!
    • 06/01/2003
    • 15:12:12
    • Score: 22 out of 23 people found this comment useful.
  • One more thing.

    PS. Should of given a paragraph structure. Overall, exquisite.
    • 05/01/2003
    • 21:47:27
    • Score: 19 out of 22 people found this comment useful.
  • Nicely Done!

    This is a great paper you wrote. Especially, coming from a 10th grader. Why did you write this? Well done.
    • 05/01/2003
    • 20:34:58
    • Score: 20 out of 21 people found this comment useful.
  • Well Done (smile rating)

    Outstanding paper "Pathfinder"! Well conducted! Well Presented! Here are some of my stress points. Stress is something that everyone takes on in his or her day-to-day lives. It is a part of our daily routines and sometimes builds up to the point where we think it is unbearable. There are many different ways of handling stress. Moreover, stress seems to occur depending on one¹s perception of events, people, and daily things for stress occurs on different occasions for different people. Pathfinder,>>>clearly stated a well presented paper.<<<RegardsMasterpuppet
    • 05/01/2003
    • 20:10:43
    • Score: 21 out of 22 people found this comment useful.
  • The spelling caught my attention to read this paper

    First of all, the title is spelled incorrectly. As I started to read your paper I found a lot of typos, grammatical spelling and quotation errors and no references as to where you got your work. Did you really think you would get access to this web site that easily? You need more aspiration to this paper. People on this web site do not just give freebies. We take our work seriously! As Axis of Evil said.......................Good Luck.:Masterpuppet:.
    • 05/01/2003
    • 18:34:30
    • Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    This is a pretty good paper coming from an 8th grader. Well done! Keep up the good work.
    • 03/01/2003
    • 13:00:54
    • Score: 11 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
  • Outstanding Paper!

    Great paper on "Caterpillar and Komatsu". Caterpillar and Komatsu are two of the largest heavy equipment manufacturers. They are leading the industry. They will remain the leaders and continue to progress. Caterpillar, has hundreds and hundreds of machines. They are also in the Fortune 500. Their goal is to be the leader in customer value. The company has been in buisness for over 75 years. Caterpillar, has many products such as: construcution equipment, mining equipment, etc. I might as well leave it at that, because if I keep going I might as well write a paper on it. Komatsu, has the world largest wheel dozer. Komatsu is committed to Quality and Reliability. Both companies have a long history of developing successful products. The Author clearly stated everything you need to know in his paper. Well Done!P.S If I would of kept going I might as well write a paper on it, hehehe. Great Job!:Masterpuppet:
    • 02/01/2003
    • 19:45:36
    • Score: 13 out of 17 people found this comment useful.
  • This paper is solid

    Stated good facts without overloading the paper excessively. Excellent reference! Very well written!
    • 02/01/2003
    • 16:24:47
    • Score: 10 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Same goes to this one. You should have made paragraphs in you're paper. You stated references in you're paper, but did not show the work cited at the end of you're paper. This paper would of looked even better if you made paragraphs, and stated the work cited. Overall, I gave you a good rating
    • 02/01/2003
    • 16:06:07
    • Score: 9 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    This is a good paper. I think you should have broken it down into paragraphs. This paper would have looked much more well presented in paragraphs.
    • 02/01/2003
    • 15:58:00
    • Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice work

    This is a good paper, but I think it would of been even better with references. You need to backup you're arguments.
    • 02/01/2003
    • 15:06:14
    • Score: 25 out of 26 people found this comment useful.
  • GOOD

    Good paper on modems. Data communicates from wires and wireless. With an IP ADRESS you can track anybody. It also stores the data(past history)in you're cookies.
    • 23/12/2002
    • 14:36:50
    • Score: 18 out of 19 people found this comment useful.
  • Solid(Rock)

    This is a solid paper! You explained the "Asian financial crisis" very well. Conducted an impressive paper. You also explained how lower prices of steel without tariffs would help the U.S economy more. Good management of resources. Keep up the good work.
    • 22/12/2002
    • 21:54:14
    • Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Nicely done.

    This is good, but you should of broken it into paragraphs. You explained each character with great strengths. You're opening statement is well put. Alfred North, A founder of mathematical logic is one of my favorite philosophers. Well done!
    • 19/12/2002
    • 21:23:40
    • Score: 12 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
  • Great Job

    This paper is well-wriiten! This 12 page paper is awsome. You're essay on "European Civilization"...is probably one of the best I have ever seen. You stated step-by-step facts. Well done:Masterpuppet:
    • 19/12/2002
    • 14:31:25
    • Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Magnificent...

    The condition of this paper is very impressive. I have nothing to add to you're paper, you pretty much said everything yourself. This paper is flawless. It was clear that the Author had no hesitation in writing it.
    • 16/12/2002
    • 11:50:44
    • Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Sterotype

    Sterotyping is alway's a factor in violence. Basically, comfort is the main issue in this story. I think sterotype will diminish as time goes on. Everybody has different views then others.
    • 20/11/2002
    • 21:09:24
    • Score: 21 out of 22 people found this comment useful.
  • Perfect

    Conducted an impressive paper. Examples that you illustrated in your paper shows the stellar qualities of your writing. Very specific paper.
    • 18/11/2002
    • 18:53:34
    • Score: 14 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
  • Leadership skills : making all important decisions yourself.

    A well-written targeted paper. You guided the paper with great strength. I see you took time to brainstorm ideas, well done.
    • 18/11/2002
    • 18:28:54
    • Score: 13 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
  • Gramatical errors

    There are a substantial amount of errors in your paper. It needed more of contrast to it. Try consistency next time. The reader( Meaning everbody in cheathouse)will not be patient if thier eyes have to zig all over your paper in order to decipher your qualifications. Supporting information is needed to your essay!!!
    • 17/11/2002
    • 18:08:32
    • Score: 22 out of 23 people found this comment useful.
  • Errors

    There are some typo errors that need adjustment(to late for that). Next time you submit a paper use spell check, but overall your paper is ok.
    • 17/11/2002
    • 17:26:32
    • Score: 14 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
  • Missing information.

    This paper should have more details. It needs more contact to it. I feel it needed more of a plot to it.
    • 10/11/2002
    • 13:21:10
    • Score: 18 out of 19 people found this comment useful.
  • Smart kid

    This is superb writing from a 10th grader. This is very creative and well thought out paper. You conducted an impressive paper.
    • 10/11/2002
    • 01:45:26
    • Score: 26 out of 28 people found this comment useful.
  • Never will happen

    There will never, ever be peace between the Jews and the Palestinians. Both countries want the sacred land for themselves. That's why people die everyday in the Middleeast.
    • 08/11/2002
    • 18:59:17
    • Score: 64 out of 79 people found this comment useful.
  • Great.

    This is a great essay! This is a very organized and customized paper.
    • 07/11/2002
    • 23:15:57
    • Score: 14 out of 15 people found this comment useful.