Do you call this bunch of words an "essay"?
- 25/09/2006
- 16:58:12
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I really liked the essay but for the future I suggest that you do not put an introduction like "In this essay I am going to discuss the crucial..." because it does not interact with the reader that much. That does not mean it was a bad essay, not at all it was great essay that helped me alot. thx for the essay!
- 22/09/2006
- 18:01:44
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This essay is good but it lake a lots of important information from the story.
- 22/09/2006
- 17:33:12
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Your essay structure is great, but there are no page numbers after the quotes.
- 06/06/2006
- 17:13:44
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Your essay is different from your topic because the topic is Macbeth's downfall and I think you should to talk about the witches and when Lady Macbeth encorourge Macbeth to kill Duncun.
- 03/06/2006
- 09:06:10
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Great essay with great expression, but are you sure about this bibiography because I think you like Saddam so you write like this.
- 03/06/2006
- 09:02:02
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This essay is great and it contains the real exortion of the author, although it is long but the structure it wonderful and the meaning and the powerful notes that you have is imposible for me
- 03/06/2006
- 08:59:39
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This essay is too long and it is imposible for every one to read it, it is like a novel and it is impossible for some one to write all that. I see that you use too much sources that you do not express your oun idea about the war in iraq in 2003.
- 03/06/2006
- 08:54:52
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This essay is not your writing, which source did you use to copy this essay.
- 03/06/2006
- 08:50:48
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This essay does not talk about reaal things that happened in China, and the structure and meaning is so bad and hard to understand it and I hope you add the facts straight since not all people spitt.
- 03/06/2006
- 08:46:29
- Score: 9 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
The ideas of the essay is good but it still hard to understand it, the strucure it so bad like there it no introduction or conclusion and you go out of topic many times and there is many great ideas that repeated and repeated with no reason.
- 03/06/2006
- 08:41:23
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This essay is amazing I cannot belive a student in high school can writ like this, may be he is a doctor.
- 03/06/2006
- 07:51:13
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Very well structured essay and an excellent analysis. The quotes used were appropiate and you gave a pretty good argument.
- 03/06/2006
- 07:43:55
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You essay like a notes no structure no effect or connection to the reader. You just through an ideas in you writing, but your writion still good and better than mine and you ideas is great that will help me in my essay this year.
- 03/06/2006
- 07:32:56
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Due to the nature of Macbeth's downfall it would be difficult to blame a single person for his downfall. The main characters that were at fault in Macbeth's downfall were "The Witches, Lady Macbeth" and of course Macbeth himself but who is to blame the most out of the three?
- 03/06/2006
- 07:29:48
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I liked this essay very much. I didn't even read Macbeth, but I understood what you meant here. I liked your argument, and the sources you posted. In short, I liked it.
- 03/06/2006
- 07:15:58
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