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  • Revision Required

    I do not think your sentence structure is all that bad and what does need work I believe has happened because this piece seems rushed -am I right? What you have to say is intelligently enough put but you could do with some quotes from reputable experts to give your argument credence, I suggest you look back at your research on this topic and find some useful quotes to use. You need an introduction and conclusion, it helps lead the reader through your work and lets them know why you are writing on this topic and what your final conclusion is. That way you avoid any confusion and people wont feel that it is unfinished. Mainly slow down and take some more time over your research, you have some valuable facts and figures there but they need framing with a few well chosen quotes.The conclusion ends rather abruptly without bringing the argument to a close.Overall, the paper needs a lot of rework. The idea is coming across, but not quite there. Keep trying! Keep trying! Keep trying! Keep trying!
    • 26/07/2003
    • 09:50:32
    • Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Good paper

    The paper flowed well and was an easy read.
    • 02/06/2003
    • 22:03:48
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • STOLEN PAPER...STOLEN PAPER

    HERE IS THE WEB SITE FROM WHERE ITS STOLEN FROM:http://www.nybooks.com/articles/article-preview?article_id=6929
    • 31/05/2003
    • 12:20:08
    • Score: 9 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • STOLEN PAPER...................STOLEN PAPER!!!!!!!!!!!

    HERE IS WHERE SHE STOLE IT FROM:http://www.geocities.com/prolifejudaism/essay.htm
    • 30/05/2003
    • 19:09:20
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • STOLEN PAPER..........STOLEN PAPER

    HERE IS THE THE URL:http://www.bookrags.com/notes/tkm/PART1.htm
    • 30/05/2003
    • 18:58:23
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • WE HAVE A THIEF! STOLEN PAPER! SHAME IN YOU!

    URL:http://www.digitaltermpapers.com/view.php?url=/American_History/westward_expansionin_nineteenth_century.shtml
    • 27/04/2003
    • 16:53:42
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • STOLEN PAPER..........STOLEN PAPER

    THE WEBSITE HE TOOK IT FROM:http://www.doctors-physicians-surgeons.info/
    • 25/04/2003
    • 09:51:25
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Break it up

    Ever hear of paragraphs?
    • 04/03/2003
    • 23:46:57
    • Score: 12 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
  • Its good to see a normal paper

    Well, at least this ain't stolen. Good paper you wrote. Well done
    • 20/01/2003
    • 20:29:16
    • Score: 23 out of 23 people found this comment useful.
  • Not smart by you

    Stolen essay!
    • 16/01/2003
    • 23:16:13
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    The abstract to this paper is very well written. I enjoyed reading this piece. Nice job.
    • 10/01/2003
    • 11:04:15
    • Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Good paper

    Very informative. I learned a lot more by reading this. Well done.
    • 10/01/2003
    • 11:02:15
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok

    This is different. I actually didn't mind it.
    • 07/01/2003
    • 00:47:50
    • Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Not bad

    I didn't think this paper was bad at all.
    • 02/01/2003
    • 17:07:02
    • Score: 24 out of 35 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    This is a well-written paper. I learned some good facts in this paper.
    • 20/11/2002
    • 12:29:51
    • Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Love this story

    I read this story in my Literature book it was a great story. This paper is very detailed and oriented. Well done.
    • 20/11/2002
    • 12:03:56
    • Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Nicely done.

    I read this story from my literature book. This is a great story and the author put the facts on target. Very good input.
    • 16/11/2002
    • 13:28:15
    • Score: 8 out of 11 people found this comment useful.