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  • Excelent information, Average construction

    Allthough all the facts are on par, the sentence structure did not vary, there were poor transitions and the opening paragraph did not have a "hook" to grab the reader.Overall a very good essay but not acceptable for anything past 11th grade.
    • 26/05/2006
    • 09:20:39
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Very well written

    This essay is very well written and an even pass for a college paper, it flows well with good transitions and is in perfect MLA format.
    • 26/05/2006
    • 09:11:03
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Inadequate for grade level

    Although this essay provided many facts it was not written well, this essay is plagued by akward sentence construction and poor grammar.
    • 26/05/2006
    • 09:08:10
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.