This is a greate piece, very creative, sureal, poetic, and to the point. This could be useful for someone who needs help writing something for their creative writing class.
- 03/06/2006
- 07:51:24
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Your scources make your essay more reliable as the previouse coment said. But you should try to add a conclusion to really add that extra punch to this essay
- 03/06/2006
- 07:45:02
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Your use of examples are really good, though it would have been better if you used more example from different shows and films. On the flip side, you should try to present the otherside of the argument to make your seem more valid.
- 03/06/2006
- 07:10:04
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I don't suggest you add search engines as part of your bibliography, otherwise this is a well written essay.
- 02/06/2006
- 15:44:07
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.