User Details For: Tatyana
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Poor kid!
But he needs to do more than canned spell check. Several spelling and grammar errors. It would be good to see more of how his recent realization of people who have more difficult challenges has changed his outlook, as a way to further develop the little essay.- 13/10/2002
- 18:57:52
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Lacks substance
This essay does not use examples from the text to support the ideas the author has put forth. The informal style is somewhat off-putting.- 13/10/2002
- 18:50:58
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.