Ok I guess ill have to explain this story...the first part of the story, the section before 'finally I can', is all thoughts running through the mind of a man who has made a personal revelation and is on his way to work to quite his job. It cuts out in mid sentence because he is hit by a car and is killed. The second part, the dialogues, is a conversation between a police officer and a witness to the hit and run previously mentioned. I am truly proud of this story and consider it to be one of my best works.
- 21/06/2006
- 03:52:28
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Is she in your head? "...an imaginary person I know..."
- 20/06/2006
- 07:56:07
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I was given the impression that you would analyse smoking as a topic fully. I think you should change the title to 'smoking pertaining to pregnancy!'
- 20/06/2006
- 07:53:24
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It is clear that you are a christian.
- 19/06/2006
- 04:52:53
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I've actually been thinking about this topic for quite some time now and came to the same conclusion through analysis of the change in personality and the likes thereof with accordance to damage to the brain. But really, great essay.
- 18/06/2006
- 00:49:06
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