User Details For: bubsie

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  • Too long

    You need to make the article shorter or not many people will read it...it was boring...
    • 01/07/2006
    • 08:08:01
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.

  • Awesome :)

    I really liked the way you introduced your essay...but not so much on your ending. Brilliant read, I can tell you have worked hard on this. [you had a lot of complicated words, you're assuming your reader knows what you are talking about...]
    • 01/07/2006
    • 07:41:17
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.